You are the moon

Posted on January 2, 2020January 1, 2020 by Lauren

It is romantic?

or am I pathetic?

I think you’re handsome,

but what do I know?

I’m young and I’m dumb

sitting here by the ocean

feeling like a fleck of sand

when you are the dunes.

I am the tide,

you are the moon;

I am nothing without you.

Published by Lauren

hey, I'm Lauren. I like writing. This is where I post different things I’m working on. Sometimes poems, sometimes short stories, sometimes general blog posts, and more. View all posts by Lauren

12 thoughts on “You are the moon”

Navin January 2, 20209:57 am Reply

Quite romantic poem.

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1. Lauren January 2, 202010:49 am Reply
  
  Thank you.
  
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Passport Overused January 2, 202010:52 am Reply

Great post 🙂

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1. Lauren January 2, 202010:56 am Reply
  
  Thank you!
  
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  1. Passport Overused January 2, 202011:04 am
    
    No problem 🙂 check out my blog when you get the chance 😀
    
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C. D. Anders January 2, 202010:58 am Reply

Clever!

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1. Lauren January 2, 202011:07 am Reply
  
  Thank you!
  
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Woodsy January 2, 202012:34 pm Reply

Beautiful.

Written straight from the tides and textures of the shore… as well as those of the heart.

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Carol Anne January 2, 20205:41 pm Reply

awwww! beautiful!

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R.E. Ray January 4, 202012:36 pm Reply

It’s romantic! Never pathetic to show such vulnerability and tenderness, especially in a poem. Another good write, Lauren.

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1. Lauren January 4, 20201:16 pm Reply
  
  Thank you!
  
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blackbird212012 January 14, 202010:45 am Reply

stepping stones to love, its so good

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